The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict how the sports center of a university look now and the planned transformation after its refurbishment.
It is clear, in general, that there will occur various changes making the center much more modern and convenient with the appearance of many new facilities.
At present, the sports center is quite simple with only three main parts: two outdoor courts on the two sides and the main house in the middle of the sports area. The main house contains a reception right at the entering door, a 25-meter swimming pool at the center which is surrounded by a seating area in the right, and a changing room in the left with a door to enter directly from the pool. Moreover, people can access directly from the reception desk to the changing room and seating area, and also there is a gym area in the north of the pool.
As far as the planned development is concerned, numerous changes are going to apply in order to make the whole area become more modern. The most significant contribution is the reconstruction merging all the current facilities into one large building and including several amenities. While the main house will remain unchanged, the outdoor courts will be destroyed to give way for a leisure pool and a sports hall. There will be two changing rooms in two opposite corners near the entrance, next to a sports shop and a cafe. Strikingly, the gym area will be extended, and two dance studios will be built in the east of the center.
- Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree? 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 84
- Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree? 78
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...and the main house in the middle of the sports area. The main house contains a recepti...
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Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ed to give way for a leisure pool and a sports hall. There will be two changing rooms ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69379844961 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58266665624 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4094463774 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147578883182 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677204611925 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696766507833 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11534140584 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827776002844 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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