the maps represent Grange park when it first accessible in 1920 and with some modification Grange park . Overall, we can see that , in Grange park there are huge buildings and attractions in this area . For instance in the top of map there is Arnold avenue along with in the bottom Eldon street with entrance together with these are not changed throughout years. In the middle of map 1920 there is fountain amd beside stage for museum.In the left of map 1920 there are 2 seats and near fountain else 2 seats in 1920 map . In the right top there are Rose garden together with Pond for water plants along with in the bottom there is Glasshouse and seats . Moreover, there was fountain in the top of map and replaced with rose garden and 4 seats in today map . Beside it there was stage for musicians together with it discouraged with Amphitheatre for concerts and steats in this palce . Furthermore, in the right-hand of map there was modification in today map . In the top of map 1920 there was Rose garden and it displaced with cafe including beside it there was Pond for water plants, in addition it replaced with children's play area. Finally, in the bottom left-hand there was Glasshouse and it replaced with water feature together with seats are shrunked in today map
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the maps represent Grange park when it firs...
^^^
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...0 and with some modification Grange park . Overall, we can see that , in Grange pa...
^^
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n Grange park . Overall, we can see that , in Grange park there are huge buildings...
^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e buildings and attractions in this area . For instance in the top of map there is...
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Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...is fountain amd beside stage for museum.In the left of map 1920 there are 2 seats ...
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Line 1, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d near fountain else 2 seats in 1920 map . In the right top there are Rose garden ...
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Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ear fountain else 2 seats in 1920 map . In the right top there are Rose garden tog...
^^
Line 1, column 575, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... top there are Rose garden together with Pond for water plants along with in the ...
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Line 1, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the bottom there is Glasshouse and seats . Moreover, there was fountain in the top...
^^
Line 1, column 757, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ith rose garden and 4 seats in today map . Beside it there was stage for musicians...
^^
Line 1, column 884, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re for concerts and steats in this palce . Furthermore, in the right-hand of map t...
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Line 1, column 960, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... map there was modification in today map . In the top of map 1920 there was Rose g...
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Line 1, column 1262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture together with seats are shrunked in today map
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63839285714 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46343277571 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40625 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9801601063 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795631067779 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468892877771 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597387817705 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795631067779 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the maps represent Grange park when it firs...
^^^
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...0 and with some modification Grange park . Overall, we can see that , in Grange pa...
^^
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n Grange park . Overall, we can see that , in Grange park there are huge buildings...
^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e buildings and attractions in this area . For instance in the top of map there is...
^^
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...is fountain amd beside stage for museum.In the left of map 1920 there are 2 seats ...
^^
Line 1, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d near fountain else 2 seats in 1920 map . In the right top there are Rose garden ...
^^
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ear fountain else 2 seats in 1920 map . In the right top there are Rose garden tog...
^^
Line 1, column 575, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... top there are Rose garden together with Pond for water plants along with in the ...
^^
Line 1, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the bottom there is Glasshouse and seats . Moreover, there was fountain in the top...
^^
Line 1, column 757, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ith rose garden and 4 seats in today map . Beside it there was stage for musicians...
^^
Line 1, column 884, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re for concerts and steats in this palce . Furthermore, in the right-hand of map t...
^^
Line 1, column 960, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... map there was modification in today map . In the top of map 1920 there was Rose g...
^^
Line 1, column 1262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture together with seats are shrunked in today map
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63839285714 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46343277571 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40625 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9801601063 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795631067779 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468892877771 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597387817705 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795631067779 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.