The maps below depict the layouts of public park in 1920 and 2020. Overall, it can be seen that during 100 year period, there are many improvements made to the park.
Previously, on the left side of the park, there were Stage for Musicians and two Rose Gardens. Moreover, there were also 4 Seats rows which were located in different spots, near the Rose Gardens, Arnold Avenue Entrance and Eldon Street Entrance. Next, on the middle side of the park there were Fountain, Arnold Avenue Entrance and also Eldon Street Entrance. Lastly, on the right side of the park, there were another Rose Garden, Pond for Water Plants, another Seats row and Glasshouse.
Currently, there are some modifications done to the Park. On the left side, the Stage for Musicians has been replaced by Amphitheatre for Concerts. Moreover, the bottom Rose garden and the four Seats row are no longer located at the previous place. Next, on the center of the park, the Fountain has been replaced with Rose Garden, which is surrounded by four Seats Row, and located in front of Arnold Avenue Entrance and Eldon Street Entrance. After that, on the right side of the park, the Rose Garden has been changed into Cafe, and Pond for Water Plants has also been turned into Children's play Area. Besides, Glasshouse and another Seats row have also been replaced by Water Feature. Lastly, there is a new Underground Car Park which can be accessed through the entrance near the Water Feature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, lastly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81673306773 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26736984553 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462151394422 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9602377102 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103416202007 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541281440501 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571608566149 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996654924314 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549230251262 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.