The plans below provides information regarding changes that a public park (Grange park) has experienced during a period of 101 years.
First of the all, the rose garden east of the entrance is replaced by a café and the Pond for water plants is moved from the park, then the children’s play area is built instead. The second point is that all of the seats have been moved to the central part of the park, and around the rose garden that has sprung up after destroying the fountain. It is worth noting that stages of musicians west of the fountain is replaced by an amphitheater for concerts, and the glasshouse is replaced by a water feature in the south-west of the park. Finally, the rose garden of west entrance from the Arnold avenue has been saved in contrast with the rose garden of west Eldon street entrance, and also the underground entrance for car park has appeared in the south-east of the park.
To conclude, the park has experienced notable changes during the related years and more facilities like car park with an amphitheater have been added.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...built instead. The second point is that all of the seats have been moved to the central pa...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ved to the central part of the park, and around the rose garden that has sprung u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, regarding, second, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71657754011 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51176419355 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508021390374 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.53032773 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175813135664 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100527916836 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657124240778 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147627441511 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684269181897 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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