The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after re development next near
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant
The given map details plans for the renovation in the next year of southwest Airport
On the whole, it is readily apparent that the number of gates will greatly expand and there will be variety of customer facing facilities such as shops, a car hire and an ATM
The location of arrival and departure will remain same but there are a plans to install additional doors. Upon entering the airport , there is currently a single cafe and check in .the future plans shows that the bag drop will replace the check in where the present check in will be moved to the right side and cafe will be added just below the bag drop of departure space.Similarly cafe, ATM, car hire will be added to the arrival space
Security, passport control, and customs will be unchanged however, the future floor plans shows that shop will be open .The largest proposed alterations Are replacing a walkaway with a long sky train track and constructing 2 branching corridors that will enablele flyers to reach more than twice as many gates
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ils plans for the renovation in the next year of southwest Airport On the whol...
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Suggestion: a plan; plans
...eparture will remain same but there are a plans to install additional doors. Upon enter...
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Suggestion: ,
...itional doors. Upon entering the airport , there is currently a single cafe and ch...
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... is currently a single cafe and check in .the future plans shows that the bag drop...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...t below the bag drop of departure space.Similarly cafe, ATM, car hire will be added to th...
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Suggestion: Similarly,
...t below the bag drop of departure space.Similarly cafe, ATM, car hire will be added to th...
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...rival space Security, passport control, and customs will be unchanged however, t...
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...ed however, the future floor plans shows that shop will be open .The largest prop...
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...loor plans shows that shop will be open .The largest proposed alterations Are rep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, similarly, so, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72471910112 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41464896701 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 22.4926829268 396% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.0 43.030603864 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.5 112.824112599 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.0 22.9334400587 388% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 5.23603664747 477% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158083230409 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129976763044 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00475991446526 0.0843802449381 6% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959063062914 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216710692912 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.3 13.2329268293 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.4 61.2550243902 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 10.3012195122 357% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.6 8.06136585366 144% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.9970731707 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.