The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The maps illustrate the site of an airport at the present and the development of this site after renovating one year later.

As can be seen from the maps, there are main adjustment in check in area, bd drop, ATM, sky train, car hire as well as gates.

To begin with, southwest airport will witness significant changes when people move check in area from the west to the center of the airport while they move coffee shop from the center to the west. Secondly, bag drop will replace the position of check in area. In addition, a café and ATM will be installed in the East of the map whereas a new car hire section will be placed near by the ATM next year. What’s more, walk way will disappear after one year and a sky train will be built instead.

Finally, the airport will open more gates which will be 18 gates a year later instead of 8 gates in the present.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...s a new car hire section will be placed near by the ATM next year. What’s more, walk wa...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35582822086 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14236080346 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7029503701 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.23603664747 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172908106099 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085088159571 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490537821434 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107646772092 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570655830729 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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