The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Abimbola1 on Fri, 08/02/2019 - 19:14

Adebayo Abimbola:
The plans depict the way Grange park was in 1920 during its first opening and the same park now.

Overall, the park now has quite a number of new features which include an amphitheatre for concerts, a Rose garden at the center instead of a fountain as well as a new water feature and play area.

Starting from the entrance at the Eldon street, the used to be a rose garden by the left and a glass house by the right. This arrangement has been changed to just a water feature located by the right. Proceeding further, in 1920, there was a water fountain directly opposite the entrance, this has also been changed to a rose garden which is surrounded by seats. Also, the small stage for musicians has been replaced with an amphitheatre which can be used for concerts.

Situated by the left and right of the entrance which opens from Arnold avenue are rose gardens. The garden by the left remains intact while the one at the right has been changed into a café which now lies behind a pond for water plants.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29899261403 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4856925394 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092107248864 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483815660497 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916802159042 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954407478799 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125027047624 0.0819641961636 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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