in the present age there are two biggest environment pollutions They are air pollution and waste

Essay topics:

in the present age, there are two biggest environment pollutions. They are air pollution and waste.

This serious reality is from many reasons. First of all, the significant is poor human consciousness. Many land where the residents still litter to lake,road, etc. They do not even know how to sort waste. Secondly, gas emissions dfrom factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating on the planet in the world. And alsothe industrialization has been destroying our environment. People cut down many forest to build factories, skyscrapers,etc. The fumes,pollutants in factories are not processed before dump into environment.
There will be many affects if we destroys the environment, however, there still has solutions. One of them is raise people's awareness of environment. Build some billboards of environmental protection. Encourage to use public transport and to take fewer flights aboard, therefore reducing emissions. Last but not least, do campaign 3Rs: reduce, recycle, reuse. It is better if we introduce this campaign with friends, family. Our environment is deforested seriously.
Please protect it,bacause the Earth is our house

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , road
...where the residents still litter to lake,road, etc. They do not even know how to sort...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun forest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many forests'.
Suggestion: many forests
...roying our environment. People cut down many forest to build factories, skyscrapers,etc. Th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 485, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...y forest to build factories, skyscrapers,etc. The fumes,pollutants in factories are ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pollutants
...ld factories, skyscrapers,etc. The fumes,pollutants in factories are not processed before d...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'destroy'
Suggestion: destroy
...ment. There will be many affects if we destroys the environment, however, there still h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
... of environmental protection. Encourage to use public transport and to take fewer flig...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bacause
...eforested seriously. Please protect it,bacause the Earth is our house
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57228915663 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25716490831 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.746987951807 0.547539520022 136% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5419424469 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8125 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.375 22.9334400587 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493213938758 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159331219629 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347644534962 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0244502191722 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225051958863 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.55 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , road
...where the residents still litter to lake,road, etc. They do not even know how to sort...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun forest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many forests'.
Suggestion: many forests
...roying our environment. People cut down many forest to build factories, skyscrapers,etc. Th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 485, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...y forest to build factories, skyscrapers,etc. The fumes,pollutants in factories are ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pollutants
...ld factories, skyscrapers,etc. The fumes,pollutants in factories are not processed before d...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'destroy'
Suggestion: destroy
...ment. There will be many affects if we destroys the environment, however, there still h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
... of environmental protection. Encourage to use public transport and to take fewer flig...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bacause
...eforested seriously. Please protect it,bacause the Earth is our house
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57228915663 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25716490831 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.746987951807 0.547539520022 136% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5419424469 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8125 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.375 22.9334400587 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493213938758 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159331219629 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347644534962 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0244502191722 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225051958863 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.55 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.