In many countries around the world the younger population is significantly increasing that has not only made impacts on their economies but also has greatly influenced their educational and developmental progress. Having contributed to generate wealth in a global competitions, Young educated and trained workforce is used to be mandatory for a country to survive in modern competitive age . This easy will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of growing younger population.
The younger population can boost the economic condition of a country by providing services to national and international consumers. Provided with best educational and training facilities, younger population is vital for growth and development of a country. For instance, Chinese younger population is equipped with modern educational and technical skills that not only contribute in progress of their country but it also provides the international market demanded services. Generating wealth and contributing in overall development of country, younger population has improved many countries economic conditions.
Only if government facilitate the young adults with job opportunities, can government get the input from youth for desired developments. Needing more resources, young adults stressed many developing countries health and educational systems. For example, India is still unable to expand their health and educational systems to many remote villages because of facilitating the growing younger population of urban areas. Young population need more resources and more jobs that many governments around the world are unable to support and provide.
In conclusion, although younger population contribute to build the country's economy and developmental progress sustainable, it stresses for more resources and infrastructures. Governments must have to provide best possible opportunities for young adults. Not handled properly, the growing adult population can be very challenging in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'competition'?
Suggestion: competition
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Suggestion: with the best
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Suggestion:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 965.302439024 177% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02120141343 4.92477711251 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24350632298 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 283.868780488 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2925501439 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131374338305 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571232436276 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202301439486 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902596971459 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011202156362 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 40.7170731707 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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