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the process of plastic bottle production

The diagram illustrates the process of making a plastic bottle.
Overall, it is clear that the plastic bottle production goes through 6 phases to become an accomplished product to be used. At each stage, there is a specific condition to form the particular shape of the bottle.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the process begins when the bottle preform is heated into the extruder machine. This is called the “melt” process. After this stage, the mould is pressed from the bottom and 2 either side of the bottle to close the inside of it. Then, the needle is injected with pressurized air into the preform, this needle is essential to form the shape when it works with the air to extend the preform to fit the existed shape of the pressed mould at the second step. Following this stage, the outside mould is removed to retain the bottle inside, which is the eventual phase to produce an accomplished plastic bottle product.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e is injected with pressurized air into the preform, this needle is essential to form the s...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...pe when it works with the air to extend the preform to fit the existed shape of the pressed...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75301204819 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41692422665 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3689651824 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364873877682 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161207557184 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126666857825 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262598221339 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00683303529903 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments