The process illustrates how diamonds are produced through several main steps. It begins with rough diamonds in the mine and finished with the delivering to sellers.
The process begins with the stones being mined in their rough form, then they are sorted into two primary groups, namely low grade, and high grade. In the former group, diamonds are specialized for industrial purposes, after which they are cut and shaped, then assessed for the level of hardness. The final step before being shipped to retailers is the pricing.
However, high-quality diamonds are set aside for cosmetic industries. After being priced, diamonds are submitted to a computer division to analyze their most effective cut. Next, they are cut using hand or a machine depending on the previous analyzing process. At this point, products are polished and then given a rating before delivering to sellers. On the contrary, diamonds which fail in the rating process will be returned for further polishing in order to be rated again before selling.
- The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 67
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- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. 78
- In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 73
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20481927711 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48189846748 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5908483047 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170754598463 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691522931662 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045468490536 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132947806415 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467724901462 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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