The process shows the different phsaes of bricks production. Summarise information
The picture highlights the various stages involved in the production of bricks. Clearly, this is a complex process, which requires certain conditions and a range of machinery.
The whole production process starts when clay is dug out by a digger, before being sent to a factory. Initially, clay has to be sifted through a metal grid. After that the roller delivers the sand to a forming station and on the way the sand is mixed with water. Afterwards, this sand mixture is formed into bricks in a mould and cut by a wire cutter. On the next stage the sand is dried in a drying oven for 24- 48 hours. Once the sand is dried, it is sent to a kiln to be baked at the temperature of 200C- 980C and, subsequently, at 870C- 1300C. Later, the sand undergoes a cooling process in a cooling chamber. At the final stage, workers of the factory pack the bricks and send them on a truck for a further use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...send them on a truck for a further use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38323353293 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48571522187 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2190504228 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106890630903 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415297703528 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370880501913 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891463851488 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00640222792172 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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