Question 1:Some countries are struggling with an increase in crime rate. Many people think that having more police on the street in the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I agree with this opinion. Have many factor come up the crime rate, such as: managing country government, environmental education, society problems, especially have a factor which will fuse lead to dagerous offender. This is family, well, I was read the book with title “ criminal psychology”. In the recent years, our country has developed in espect from economis to critics, but life quality of people not improve, low-income, lack of working and ability compete in work higher than in the past. As the result, law-breaker come out into society.
And have many way to innocent people become guilty, crime not discriminate old, sex, even child can wrong-doer. Back to the previous idea that family is main fator lead to increasing in crime rate. The children are born and grow up inenvironmental education have violence, behaviour unlawful or bad relationship’s parents.
Many people think that having more police on the streets in the only way to reduce crime. I disagree with this opinion, because the behavious crime more sotisphicated than before. If our country have many police, the crime rate will not reduce that increase, we can replace police by install camera street. Installing will have effect.
If the crime rate going on, the country will not develop, therefore, need having method solved this problem. First, we need change the rules to appreciate with society now. Second, need having many rehobilitation programmes show on TV to warn citizen. Finally, I rekon that with this method will reduce the crime rate and life’s people will be changed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1640625 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71281680178 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3735158079 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448388990039 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153827684191 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129033717117 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27382191412 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12379859425 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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