Question: Cycling is a healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?
It is true that cycling is used uncommonly. There are various reasons why bicycles are not popular vehicle, but the government could certainly take measures to address this issue.
First and foremost, bicycles have pretty slow speed, while the most significant with a vehicle is a speed. It makes bicycles not used regularly in daily life. In case, we are required to go to school or go to work at the proper time. While cycling is very slow we have various choices such as public transport, motorbike, car,... Moreover another point at issue is bicycles using human muscle-power. If we cycle a short distance, it will not be a problem. But with a long journey, not everyone has the stamina to maintain that. In present-day society, the majority of people select different vehicles rather than bicycles because it fails to benefit major city dwellers in particular
There are many ways to tackle this issue. Firstly, we should change everybody's mindset about being environmentally conscious, It helps people use this environmentally friendly vehicle. The government should build up cycling lanes to protect cyclists. Organizing a monthly green day also helps increase the likelihood of people turning to cycling. On the other hand, individuals should raise social awareness of environmental protection and form a habit of cycling.
To sum up, it is clear that the uncommon use of bicycles nevertheless, the issue can be resolved by promoting the use of bicycles in daily life. However, it is rather impractical to expect cycling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...such as public transport, motorbike, car,... Moreover another point at issue is bi...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...as public transport, motorbike, car,... Moreover another point at issue is bicycles usin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, in particular, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.164 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85663018258 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2194786207 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6875 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.23603664747 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166406844563 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536001128191 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528203466512 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103528000737 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429679634601 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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