Scientists and engineers are continuing to look for new ways to generate electricity. The following is a diagram of how electricity may be generated from tidal flow.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the new process of electric generation.
It is clear that there are four main stages in the process of producing electricity. Firstly, electricity is generated from rising and falling tides.
At the initial stage of the process, electricity is generated from tidal flow. The process continues with electricity being gone through main construction and roadway. After that, electricity is carried to sluice gates to control flow and to be ready for the next stages.
The process continues with a step called “water flow” where water from incoming tide passes generator. At the final stage, electricity is put into electricity generator, and then electricity finally produced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 611.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 108.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65740740741 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.22370979547 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9547774665 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675925925926 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.3236651722 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.375 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26592848895 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127347527888 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533509874694 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1683111731 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589066598833 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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