The Skydrive 6000 Carplane of the future

Essay topics:

The Skydrive 6000 - Carplane of the future

The diagram demonstrates a futuristic car called the Skydrive 6000 and how it can be used to travel as a normal car and a flight. The only feature that differentiates the Skydrive 6000 from the normal cars that are available today, is it's folded wings installed in the sides of the car which enable it to fly.

If we look at the driving and flying manual of this potential invention, it can be seen that the Skydrive 6000 can be used as a normal car in the driving mode and if it to be used as a light aircraft, some procedures need to be followed.

The Skydrive 6000 in the car mode, can be drive in the road and having arrived at the carplane airport, it's controls are set to flying mode. A final check has to be carried out by a mechanic at the airport to ensure safety and to give approval for the take off. Once the approval us given, the Skydrive 6000 shall take off and change it's functions to full flight mode A that allows it to fly like an aero plane.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at allows it to fly like an aero plane.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21505376344 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35682638163 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5094925303 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2116599257 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119005383523 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670509373884 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145625115666 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432587898816 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.79 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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