Some argue that not all criminals should be punished in prison but that they should be insisted to serve the community. This essay completely agrees with the statement because helping the community will help in community growth and help the criminals to get a better job in future.
Some argue that not all criminals should be punished in prison but that they should be insisted to serve the community. This essay completely agrees with the statement because helping the community will help in community growth and help the criminals to get a better job in future.
To begin with, not everyone commits a serious crime such as Murder are locked in prison, there are some people who are prisoned for minor crimes such as theft, not following the rules etc, while the serious criminals have to be sentenced to prisons, the others can be utilized to do unpaid work for the community. This will help in the growth of the community and the environment. Activity such as planting trees conserving young children the elderly people. This is proven particularly effective in Delhi jail where the prisoners are allowed to meet the orphanage kids and old age home people and help them in their basic needs.
On the other hand, serving the community not only help other people but also the Prisoners themselves. The prisoners will have basic knowledge of cooking and gardening which will later help in their future at start any small-scale industry. This helps them to lead a normal life in society after the sentenced period. A recent survey from Times Now has revealed that 60% of criminals are able to lead the normal life after they get trained in the community service.
To conclude had been given a chance to serve the community during their prison time to lead a normal life in the later part of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... help the criminals to get a better job in future. To begin with, not everyone commits...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...locked in prison, there are some people who are prisoned for minor crimes such as theft...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38524204042 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1242931149 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.557947775333 0.215688989381 259% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207999785819 0.103423049105 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186050715008 0.0843802449381 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367731683983 0.15604864568 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.325814848115 0.0819641961636 398% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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