In some culture old people are valued more, while in other cultures youth is considered more valuable.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In comparison between old and youth, some people believe that old people are more noteworthy, while other says; young people are having more significant values relatively old. In my opinion, it depends on the situation and experience which creates the need of person accordingly, as well as every country's people has their own perspective to judge people.
To begin with, I would like to outline the several advantages of old people who eventually plays most essential role in many places and there is no alternative of old and experienced people. Many intellectual people say that there is no short cut of experience, it always requires ample of time and input to learn. In addition, every experienced people knew the way to came out from trouble and that's the only reason of old people to be considered for Senior Position in organizations namely; General Manager, Corporate Manager, HR Manager and many others.
On the other hand, in few countries people need young and energetic people, because they believe youngsters are fully aware of current affairs and market trends comparatively old people. One of the obvious advantages of youngsters is that they are always intended to do something new that eventually would be worthwhile for instant, creativity in products, adoption of new technology, find loopholes in market and so on. Furthermore, some expert are concerned that in many industries people are hardly bearing old environment owing to old people, whereas, the world has changed the environment and moving rapidly towards the advance technology.
In conclusion, it’s quite difficult to differentiate between both of them, but, they have their own values and qualities that cannot be exchanged and people are always considered by their own values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29328621908 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83346400602 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.9458537623 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.444444444 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4444444444 5.23603664747 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232356035353 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947899167559 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104636915407 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144735873159 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984260950262 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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