Every individual has different acceptance levels about their current situations. Some people are of th opinion that, it is better to accept difficult circumstances while others advocate attempts to work hard and overcome such situations. In the scope of this essay, both the views will be thoroughly discussed. Personally, i side with the latter view.
On the one hand, people tend to find satisfaction in their bad situations, be it an economical crisis or an unsatisfactory profession. In fact, this is mainly because such individuals do not have any other option but to survive in these conditions. For instance, most university students face difficuly in finding a job which matches their university major and are often forced to work in unsatisfactory conditions and maybe get bullied at work. Nevertheless, these people accept these circumstances just for the sake of making money and survive in the world.
On the other hand, working hard to overpower such conditions can help to advance in professional career as well as to lead a successful life. In fact, there are many examples throughout history about people who became successful by conquering difficult circumstances. Take an example, Christiano Ronaldo was born to a financially backward family and had no money receive training for football or join a club. However, he took many parttime jobs later on his teenage years and worked hard. Finally, as a result of his constant struggle he was selected to the Portugal national football team.
To conculde, in my opinion , although it is common for people to accept their situations, in order to advance in career and succeed in life, they should overpower the obstacles and work hard.
Situations are different for…
Situations are different for each individual. Some are having very worst cases in their lives whereas others experience contradictory conditions. A few people opine that it is better to accept the different state of affairs, whilst other try to work hard in their work and overcome their circumstances. I believe that improving the worst situations better is the best option to achieve good things in life. Now I would like to discuss both the views in the scope of the eassy.
Firstly, people accept a bad situation and move on according to the condition. Those are economical crisis in their families or doing a job which is very unsatisfactory. In fact, this is because that individual person does not have other option to survive in society. For example, in this corona pandemic situation some are lost their jobs and some closed their business for more than 6 months but they are paying their shop rents and hostel fees. Nevertheless, these people accept all the conditions and go on to their lives all over the world.
On the other hand, a few people accept the circumstances and improve their knowledge and skills in their works and the situations. In fact, there are so many examples in the world who became successful by facing difficult problems in their lives. For instance, Virat a professional Indian batsman who is from very poor background to take training from cricket academy. However, he supposed to do different jobs to get money and improve his bating style and now he became captian of Indian cricket team.
To conclude, I strongly believe that accepting bad situations is better thing. Although people come across many issues in their individual life, the person needs to develop his/her skills and advacements in their jobs or work places.
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Now and then, people find…
Now and then, people find themselves in appalling situations and everybody has conflicting views when it comes to dealing with them. Some people think it is better to make peace with the circumstances and let life take its course, while others believe in taking action to overcome their crisis.
First of all, doing nothing may seem like accepting defeat, but there are several instances in life, when not stepping up can be considered the best possible solution to a problem. To epitomize, human relationships can be considered, people meet other people and develop bonds and sometimes these connections do not last despite the efforts they put to make things work. As one cannot compel others to be a part of his/her life, the most constructive action that can be taken in such a situation is not doing anything and just accept the reality. With time propagating forth, people learn the lessons from their past and become stronger than before, maybe this is why many agree to welcome the situation the way it is.
However, facing your issues head-on may appear difficult at one point but it can surely lead to fruitful conclusions for later on and in my opinion, it is the best way masses can tackle and overthrow the difficulties they are experiencing. For example, if a person gets injured and is bleeding, so the logical and safer move is to clean and cover the wound before letting it become infectious. Waiting for things to be settled down may not work always, so people need to see, analyze and then work to turn the tides in their favor.
Overall, people having different mindsets can decide differently to act upon the obstacles they are facing, depending on what goes best for them, they can either choose to just let things happen or take the best feasible measures to deal with them.
it would be really appreciated if anyone can give feedback on my attempt
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18115942029 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96006426902 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7776047645 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256511471756 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802764929096 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623506969532 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151389235094 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706894660775 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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