Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully.
Others disagree. Discuss both views, and give you opinion.
Firstly, some people prefer to not plan their leisure time because they thought that this time is free and not need to plan it in order to do whatever they want in any free time without any responsibility or plane to do something. As you know, if people want to plane it, they will be in stress whether they don’t do it. For instance, some famous people who work a lot said that we do not require to manger our free time.
On the contrary, some other people try to not plan everything which it does not want such as daily leisure time, but if they something want to plan, they have to plan it like go out of the border their countries and attempt to create a plan in order to not lose time. For instance, some people thought that they do not have to take a plan if its daily leisure time, but if it like trip have to do it.In my opinion, people should plane activities in their free time since the activities will be more arrangement if they plan it before. As a result, planning the activities will help to increase exploiting any time which they have free by activities. For example, some people who want to travel like tourism will have to plan their time’s activities.
In conclusion, I have talked with people who think that should take a plan, who do not care if take it or not and about my opinion I agree with taking a plan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, you know, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32283464567 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31284385519 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44094488189 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1196175468 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.625 5.23603664747 318% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305666854698 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167445326861 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662799424418 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205637684427 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853885287517 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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