some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History
Technology is the way to progress for the human race. It is often a debatable issue by a lot of individuals that students should be proficient in subjects such as science and technology, whereas others argue that history holds a crucial part in students' lives. In my opinion, I agree with the latter view, and in this essay, I will explore both statements and provide a proper conclusion.
To commence with, history plays a pivotal role in any human’s life, as it portrays the knowledge of past events and the origin of mankind. In other words, educating students on history will turn them into better decision-makers in their future, and exploring their ancestors' achievements, cultures, traditions and norms enhance both morals and ethical values. Moreover, it aids them to understand strategies that are used in this contemporary world. To illustrate, the textbooks in schools provide profound knowledge about the world wars in ancient period which enable the adolescent’s to be aware of the methods used to attain peace
On the other hand, despite the merits of studying history, science and technology fields should not be overlooked, as it revolutionized mankind to significant positions. Having said that, with technological advancements, humans are facilitated to introduce numerous innovative solutions to battle with hunger, disease, and poverty. Additionally, it makes our lives easier and healthier than earlier years. For instance, most of the developed nations are contributing funds in research and science fields expecting to create vaccines and antibiotics to eradicate deadly viruses, which ultimately escalate the life expectancy rate of the nation.
To recapitulate, when it comes to essential subjects, people always divide their opinions, some argue that young children should be taught regarding popular fields such as science and technology which aid to raise a human standard of living. In contrast, a few defend that history will be more useful as it teaches the concept of identity to the adolescent.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-11-07 | bangtaenie_77 | 78 | view |
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 89
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 56
- some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts and provide a proper conclusion. To commence with, history plays a pivota...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the methods used to attain peace On the other hand, despite the merits of...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... life expectancy rate of the nation. To recapitulate, when it comes to essent...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 965.302439024 180% => OK
No of words: 319.0 196.424390244 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44827586207 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98666961007 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 106.607317073 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617554858934 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 283.868780488 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.690736408 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.833333333 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184697691292 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549422938547 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348801368539 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102225107302 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196113369557 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 40.7170731707 270% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.