Some people say that subject like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable.
Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, schools tend to cut out a few art-oriented subjects including arts, music, drama, and creative writing. But there are still some individuals who believe that those subjects will benefit students in various ways, and to some extent, I am personally in agreement with this idea.
To begin with, art-oriented subjects enhance students’ ability to either present or persuade. Art is like a world that helps them discover and develop their latent talents, it also allows pupils to compare and learn about the different viewpoints about both the new and old topics as the interpretation of works of art depends on each enjoyer’s perspectives. Furthermore, if students can confess their opinions to their classmates about some art aspects, they will be able to cultivate eloquence, teamwork, imagination, and critical thinking. Those may enhance thinking ability, and they will be the main motivation to promote children’s studies.
Second, art can boost students’ confidence and communication skills. Through numerous kinds of performing art, students will learn various types of communication, learn to draw pictures, compose songs or poems, participate in plays, etc. to express their point of view. Arts allow students to share their voices through their performances. Moreover, it is exciting for the teachers to be able to see their students little by little develop and nurture their ability to communicate through different artistic mediums.
To sum up, it is advisory that schools should keep these art-oriented subjects with a view to bettering student’s behavioral skills in life.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-04-02 | Đỗ Ngọc Diệp | 89 | view |
| 2023-04-02 | Đỗ Ngọc Diệp | 89 | view |
- Some people say that subject like arts music drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people say that subject like arts music drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable Do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...magination, and critical thinking. Those may enhance thinking ability, and they w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49397590361 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95337772062 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642570281124 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6952636396 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169187247767 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657831709618 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503903475063 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115340526566 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563607306318 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.