Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, different crimes are rampant all over the country although there are corresponding law punishments for it. People still tend to do heinous acts because of vast reasons that for them considered as acceptable. This essay will explain the both views and my opinion with regards to the concept of longer imprisonment is the best way to lessen crime and also, discuss other alternative ways of reducing it.
Longer imprisonment in my opinion is not the best way to reduce crime. I consider it as a shallow way in order to give due justice to the oppressed family and the victim itself. For example, in my country, the crime rate doubled the moment that death penalty was abolished. Rape cases, murder and robbery are the top cases always broadcasted on television however there is no due process nor justice implemented.
I believe that other alternative ways are better in reducing crime. For example, death penalty and lethal injection, these way people will be afraid or somewhat hesitant to commit any crime because this will be grave enough to suffice their wrongful acts. My father was killed by drug addicts while on his way home after work, and experiencing this dreaded situation, I will never say no to these kind of punishment. Innocent lives will be protected and this will also give an advantage to get even with the culprit after due process.
In my opinion, committing immoral acts need to have equivalent punishment so that it will serve as a lesson and warning flag to the criminals. “An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth” is my principle in life and it will be so fulfilling if I also see the person who killed my father, the only one that I love the most, be sentenced to death too.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...eaded situation, I will never say no to these kind of punishment. Innocent lives will be p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72757475083 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6154979586 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 106.607317073 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.438375654 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267368860005 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126201239404 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1546843606 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170095804297 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972020683961 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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