Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that spare time can be wasted while watching sports. I, however, believe that spending time with on television with different channels is depended on their interest and activities.
To commence with, I would like to outline the some drawbacks and benefits of spending leisure time of watching sports that could be right or wrong. Nowadays, it has commonly seen that watching and playing sports has become more top-op activity around the globe where mostly teenagers and adolescent's are moving briskly towards the sports. Moreover, watching anything while spare time is just because of the habit and interest which comes from surrounded people or it can be by birth. As numerous people said, watching sports on leisure time is tremendous activity but, excessive use of television can be the cause of many diseases namely; obesity, laziness and many others. Apart from this, survey depicts that much involvement with television is so harmful either it is sports or something else.
On the other hand, number of people is too much addicted of watching sports specially Football and Cricket that actually is not beneficial for health. Many adepts assert that mostly people watch sports owning to their role model for example, Pakistani Captain Sarfraz Ahmed has always follow Wasim Akram who has huge number of fan following along with people called him king of swing. Last but not the least, few number of people looks their career in sports henceforth they always keep on watch sports every time to do some practices or get some extra information pertaining to desire.
To sum up, watching sports at leisure is very good habit for passionate people as well as passing time with good activity which has several advantages as stated above but, not to overlook its disadvantage as well which can ruin the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07236842105 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38401300448 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3590015509 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313011169312 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131461343449 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688296563001 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194863198864 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391962281444 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.