Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People differ in their views about the necessity of zoos. While some argue that wild animals should not be lock in cages, many believe that zoos are indispensable in preserving many endangered species. From my point of view, I strongly advocate that zoos play a crucial role in protecting wildlife.
On the one hand, animals will suffer some detrimental impacts if they are kept in cages, especially the lack of freedom. Most of the animals in the zoos are dwellers of the wildlife and they have the instinct of living in their habitat or finding food. Compared to the provision of food from people and an artificial living environment, some might get bored and even died. In addition, many animals in zoos are used for the purpose of making money. For example, they are forced to perform to attract a bigger number of visitors. Therefore, it is brutal to both confine their freedom and mistreat them for other purposes at the same time.
In spite of the aforementioned arguments, I strongly agree that zoos will bring numerous advantages for both wild animals and humans. Many species, which are on the brink of extinction, can be well protected in the zoo as it will prevent them from poachers and predators. Particularly, rhinos, which have been hunted at a large scale due to their valuable horns, should be kept in a secured place like zoo. Another reason would be the educational value of the zoos. Keeping animals in a place where people can see would raise their awareness in protecting the wildlife. Moreover, this also enables scientists to have more information about the species and broaden human knowledge.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that both sides are well-grounded. Although confining animals in a small place would be cruel, zoos are vital in wildlife conservation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67772512271 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7435113521 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30079720114 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905413781196 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545925484027 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189480037176 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373493026853 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 40.7170731707 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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