the street plans below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children
The plans illustrate the comparison of current street of residential district with a park and playground in the year 2016 and the suggested changes, to improve the quality of safety of local families and children, that could be done in the year 2025.
Overall, the diverse modifications will be done to all major components on the road, suchlike replacement, addition and remove. Evidently, the bigger proposed changes will have been done to the major junction by 2025.
While street plan by the year 2025 proposed adding zebra crossing to the Staple road, also railings will be introduced on the both sides of High road near the entrance of park with playground, in the northeast and southeast, respectively. In addition to this, to the south of the area, four new traffic lights should be installed for four streets, Tennis st, Bridge st, Bond Way and Hatton Avenue.
With regards to the major junction of the streets,that mentioned above, it suggested to replace it with roundabout. However, community will no longer see the residential area on the east part of roundabout, due to the fact, that it will be removed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03191489362 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74562906267 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579787234043 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4577040535 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266062305729 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104921669716 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817536195838 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148158179907 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822061268002 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.