Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Our day to day life is surrounded by celebrities from different area like sports, film stars, politics. Teenagers are most influenced age and get attracted by good or bad deeds of their role models. We will discuss both positive and negative impact of choosing celebrities as role model in our society.
To start, celebrities live in own glamour and rick life style which can not suit common man. Teen age is most adoptable age in which teenager try to follow their role model which some times parents can not afford. Some politicians get involved in wrong deeds which can be easily followed by young generation and take them in wrong path. Name of Sport persons also very common in betting and fixing which also influence young generation badly.
On positive note, all celebrities are not involved in wrong deeds. Many celebrities are doing really well and can be followed as role model. In sports, Sachin Ramesh Tendulkar is very known name, who struggled in his early days but set a benchmark in cricketing world. Another example we can take of Nicole Kidman, who involved with UN and travels across world for awareness among people.
With taking both positive and negative notes we can easily conclude all celebrities can not fit to become role models or eliminated to not become role models. Parents are also responsible to guide children and assess their choice for selecting their role models.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287937743191 0.268076937826 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.163424124514 0.116061578633 141% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0933852140078 0.0759168565197 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0661478599222 0.0366838410393 180% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0428015564202 0.0131127313244 326% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108949416342 0.155750635184 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0544747081712 0.0379272487307 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44394508858 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233463035019 0.0210936926555 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0311284046693 0.0948980150116 33% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0311284046693 0.00437022459523 712% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0272373540856 0.00967000014798 282% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1438.0 1161.00487805 124% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.9 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06751054852 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341772151899 0.337110787985 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240506329114 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168776371308 0.171178102325 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105485232068 0.112407865282 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44394508858 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 56.5239471384 49.3433353143 115% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2307692308 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9217862311 42.9750493124 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 135.714022679 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.689975730869 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 42.2814021422 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.65714285714 2.94281807926 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192666881418 0.418131533498 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100122774842 0.181151798455 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0564476790658 0.0850326197045 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534759689722 0.706616315825 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0977258340691 0.157042692854 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781355138374 0.228904883108 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395082678288 0.108899403657 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.214189847409 0.367819155151 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0498268520643 0.0812612215331 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131170358005 0.316326947829 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431008401567 0.0921553760075 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.