The table illustrates the number of victims by age group and offence category were reported in 1999, in Venezuela. There were classified into six age groups and five offence categories. It is clear that, robbery made up largest rate in all of age groups.
As can be seen from table, the number of victims for robbery was 9680, which was ranked first in Venezuela in 1999 and made up highest rate in all of age groups, especially, 15-24, 25-44 and 45-64 age groups had 4558, 3312, 1067 respectively. The lowest rate in this offence category was 65 age group which had 220.
Meanwhile, the others were much lower victims follow age group compare with robbery. Total victims of Kidnapping and blackmail were ranked the second had 233. Then, the number of murder victims had 162. And negligence had lowest total victims in the report, made up 54, It is worth nothing that 25-44 age group was not any victims
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
... murder victims had 162. And negligence had lowest total victims in the report, made up 54...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...total victims in the report, made up 54, It is worth nothing that 25-44 age group...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7106918239 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30257404594 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9168253572 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388607930727 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187038486527 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151293814707 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295319617625 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101845376792 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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