The table shows the 8 different types of travelling vehicle by average distance in miles in England from the year of 1985 to 2000.
Overall, car was the most preferred mode of travel in both 1985 and 2000. While the taxi had the least miles in 1985, bicycle has lowest distance in 2000. In sum of all modes, people more travelled in 2000 than 1985.
In 1985, people were walked 255 miles averagely while 237 miles were walked by people in the year of 2000. Bicycle was the one of the decreased mode because it had 51 miles distance at beginning of the period and it decrease by 10 miles. (41 miles.) The most using vehicle, car, had the highest number in the years of 1985 and 2000. (3,199 and 4.806 respectively) In addition, choosing of local bus was decreased in 15 years such as it was 429 miles in 1985 and 274 miles in 2000.
Despite of local bus, long distance bus usage was increased by more than two times, 54 miles to 124 miles. The other one was train that raised 77 miles from 1985 to 2000. In the same way, people got in to taxi more in 15 years because in 1985, it had just 13 miles and reached to 42 miles. Other mode of travel was 450 miles as summary and increased to 585 miles in 2000. Results of all modes summary show the almost 2000 miles increase between 1985 and 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: has the lowest
...xi had the least miles in 1985, bicycle has lowest distance in 2000. In sum of all modes, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...tance at beginning of the period and it decrease by 10 miles. 41 miles. The most using v...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... 41 miles. The most using vehicle, car, had the highest number in the years of 1...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f all modes summary show the almost 2000 miles increase between 1985 and 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28048780488 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0349619481 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451219512195 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9778589372 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146451439681 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744012180642 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546234367768 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1278751705 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411652226668 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.