The table illustrates the proportion of people divided into three groups by age,(18-25; 25-40; 40-65), working in 9 professional areas.
Overall, the most popular employment sectors are different for each category, whereas the least prevalent jobs are the same for all of 3 age groups. Also, there is a significant increase in number of elder employees in two sectors,(manufacturing and local government), while in retail can be seen the downward trend.
The highest number of young people preferred to work in retail (23). Health, manufacturing and local government were the groups where the middle-aged people worked more often than in other professional fields,(15,15 and 12 respectively). The biggest number of people over 40 years old chose manufacturing (23).
In terms of rise, the positive age correlation can be seen in manufacturing (12-15-23), and local government (8-12-18). On the other hand, such option as retail posed the reverse dynamics (23-7-6). These are two sectors which didn't show any changes depending on age: low (4) and accounting (3-2-3). The others (agriculture, catering, health and education) demonstrated a weak rise or just fluctuated near the same indexes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , manufacturing
...number of elder employees in two sectors,manufacturing and local government, while in retail c...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to manufacture'.
Suggestion: to manufacture
...umber of people over 40 years old chose manufacturing 23. In terms of rise, the positive a...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ics 23-7-6. These are two sectors which didnt show any changes depending on age: low ...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...on age: low 4 and accounting 3-2-3. The others agriculture, catering, health and educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39673913043 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16981104045 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9645658948 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204320946416 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742414100527 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625037938935 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121061252394 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452310346786 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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