The table illustrates the favored pastimes in 8 different countries between the age group of 30-50 years. The pastimes are presented across the top of the table. Overall, it is immediately apparent that regardless of the nationalities and the cultural differences, pastimes such as watching tv, sports, reading and hobbies are more favorite to music, beach and sleep.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, it is apparent that Canada, Australia and the USA has the highest percentage of television viewers (60%,65%,60%) respectively as compared to Korea (22) and China (15). As can be seen, Australians and the Americans are very keen on sports (30%,33%) which corresponds with going to the beach very often (30% ) in both countries.
It can be witnessed that reading is very popular in Asian countries mainly, japan(62%), China(60%) and Korea(60%) which is double that of France and England. Remarkably, China has 50% people interested in hobbies while the Americans undoubtedly, have more people listening to music (23%) in comparison to other countries. Interestingly, 20% of English people love sleeping as opposed to only 2% in Canada and the USA.
- The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. 73
- The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. 67
- The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. 61
- Some people say education is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21857923497 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94058130715 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1246753236 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.375 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0807256829369 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358684640453 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349735234192 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548883698409 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436598906328 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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