The table below gives information about favorite pastimes in different countries in percentage ?

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The table below gives information about favorite pastimes in different countries in percentage ?

The tabular chart reveals the information about seven pastimes activities which are performed by age of 30-50 year eight different nations. The data is calibrated in percentum. which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that Japan is only one nation who performed on activity that is reading. As well as, Japan has adapt highest percentage in reading.
It can be seen that, Canada is participated in seven different activities but it has adapt highest percentage in telivision. In addition to this, England is participated several different activities but it has been adapted high percentage in reading. Furthermore, in Australia, telivision, sport, reading are 65%, 30%, and 15% respectively.
As far as, trend is concerned that In U.S.A are participating in all activities, and it has been adapt in least percentage in sleep. Apart of all this, England are participating in four different activities that is reading, hobbies, music and sleep. Ratherthan, In korea nation, reading, hobbing, and sport has been 60%,45% and 21% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...s. The data is calibrated in percentum. which is clearly and coherently represented. ...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
... that is reading. As well as, Japan has adapt highest percentage in reading. It can ...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'adapt the highest'.
Suggestion: adapt the highest
... that is reading. As well as, Japan has adapt highest percentage in reading. It can be seen ...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...n seven different activities but it has adapt highest percentage in telivision. In ad...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'adapt the highest'.
Suggestion: adapt the highest
...n seven different activities but it has adapt highest percentage in telivision. In addition t...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...dition to this, England is participated several different activities but it has been adapted high...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... As far as, trend is concerned that In U.S.A are participating in all activitie...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...far as, trend is concerned that In U.S.A are participating in all activities, an...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...far as, trend is concerned that In U.S.A are participating in all activities, an...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...far as, trend is concerned that In U.S.A are participating in all activities, and it...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...ting in all activities, and it has been adapt in least percentage in sleep. Apart of ...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the least'.
Suggestion: in the least
...n all activities, and it has been adapt in least percentage in sleep. Apart of all this,...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[2]
Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: Apart from
...een adapt in least percentage in sleep. Apart of all this, England are participating in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40718562874 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.134683355 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4325907504 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137838917435 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495029700589 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569525539088 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842379389774 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435985558821 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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