The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in percentage.
The given tabular chart demonstrates. The information about the seven pastimes activities which were preformed by the age of 30-50 years people in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in per centum.
It is clear that, About 60% of Canadians , Australias and Americons like watching television. Furtharmore, This figure is quite low for China where only 15% of people watch television. Moreover, Almost 45% of people like to hobbies in other five nations. As opposed to only 20% in France. The prederence given to reading in Korea China and Japan is 60,60 and 62percentage respectly.
Moving ahead,The people of America like music at 23% whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the othe countries feel the same way. 20% of people in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada and the USA, such as, the figure is only 2%. Moreover, Around 24% of people like sport in all nations. Apart from this, The preference given to beach in Australia and USA in 30 and 30 percentage respectly.
Overall, mostly people like to reading as campare to television in all nations and the people leisure like to sleeping in all countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: ,
...It is clear that, About 60% of Canadians , Australias and Americons like watching ...
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Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... like to hobbies in other five nations. As opposed to only 20% in France. The pred...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...campare to television in all nations and the people leisure like to sleeping in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87113402062 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68384996313 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3071057434 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741134033311 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252865311156 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515669995364 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532350182775 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589279644331 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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