The table illustrates the number of native speakers in six popular languages as well as the number of speakers of these languages as an additional language.
It can be seen from the table, the number of people who speak Mandarin Chinese was the highest among these six languages which was over than one thousand million people used it. Portuguese language got the lowest number of speakers in both of as a native speaker and as a second language with total 213 million people who used this language.
According to the table, English with around 600 million people was the most used language as an additional language all over the world and 339 million people used it as a first language. The total number of speakers who talk in Arabic (230 million) did not show significant difference to people who speak in Portuguese (213 million) in terms of used the language as a native and as an additional language.
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples. 77
- Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion? 65
- Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion? 80
- Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples 88
- Task 2 In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas Do t 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77848101266 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5094996568 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449367088608 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.3115730558 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 151.0 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968134725961 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688755498435 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325331701325 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822833960559 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145001311643 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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