The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

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The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years.summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

The given table reveals the information about the population for different nation and also prediction of growth for year 1990 to 2050.

It is cleared from the chart that United state have highest proportion of population till 2000.The rate of population at starting was 249.9 million and 275.7 million in 2000.it is predicted that it will remained highest with 34o million in 2050.The country with lowest projectiongrowth rate in new Zealand with 3.4 million in 199p and will reach to 4.7 million in 2050.

Furthermore, The number of population in Canada was 3.4 million in starting and it was 3.8 million in 2000.It will rise to 39 million in 2050 where as in Australia, The rate of population was 17.u million in 1990 and slightly increase in the growth of population was 26 million in the year 2050.

In conclusion, United State have highest proportion of population and it will continue to rise and Newzealand have lowest rate of population among the countries and it will remain slightly rise.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97633136095 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73275425171 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455621301775 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3531266753 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.25 112.824112599 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.25 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106491719663 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945439583699 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827095062716 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945439583699 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827095062716 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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