The table below gives information about population of over 60 years old in regions in 2000,and the predicted numbers of population over 60 in 2050. it also show the world population over 60 in 2000 and 2050.
The rendered tabular chart depicts the infromation about how the populace of senior citizen vary in different parts of world from the year 2000 to the year 2050. The data is caliberated into percentum.
At the fleeting glance, it is Crystal clear that in 2000, the highest proportion of oldsters was witnessed in Europe which was 22%. This was followed by whole world which accounted for 13%. As saw in case of North America and the Oceania both countries had the same number of old people to 11% . Whereas, Aferica registered as the least count of senior citizens and the figure was observed to be 5%.
In 2050, on the other hand, Europe will show the maximum percentage of oldest people wich is surveyed to be 31%. The second highest proportion will be observed in Asia. which will accounted for 28%. Meanwhile, Africa will show the lowest citizenry of elderly persons that will registered to12%.
From an overall analysis,it is vivid, Europe showed large percentum of senior citizen in past as well as in future while Africa have lowest population of over 60-yearsolds persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91847826087 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49373795722 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4676195799 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177066194911 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475034889151 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602632250871 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101998583971 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605663529485 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.