The table provides data about metro in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles, its open, length and transported passengers per yer in millions.
From given data is obvious, that underground railway system has a long history in Europe, namely in London and Paris (1863 and 1900), from the other hand, Los Angeles has the youngest subway from all mentioned cities (established in 2001).
In length, London's and Paris' underground rail is also the longest between other cities, with 394 and 199 kilometres respectively. Kyoto's metro has the shortest route with 11 kilometres.
However, underground trains transport more than two times more passengers yearly than metro in London ( 1927 millions and 775 millions). Paris' underground keeps its second position in this chart with 1191 millions passengers transported every year. The last developed subways in Kyoto and Los Angeles transport the less passengers with almost same numbers ( 45 and 50 millions a year).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in Kyoto and Los Angeles transport the less passengers with almost same numbers 45...
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...less passengers with almost same numbers 45 and 50 millions a year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31168831169 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61432797174 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3639812986 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113092896698 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478931258469 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362201485353 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684133044766 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198675598619 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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