The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table compares six underground networks, which are demonstrated in terms of their ages, size and the number of people using them annually, in 6 major cities.

Overall, it is clear that the three oldest underground railway systems are larger and serve more passengers each year compared to newer networks.

London underground railway system is the oldest and biggest one, which was built in 1863 and has 394 kilometers of the route. Paris is the second largest and serves more passengers than the former, 1191 million people every year. While only third in terms of size, Tokyo welcomes the most users, at 1927 million people each year.

The three newer underground railway systems are Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles. The first one is the most extensive, with 126 kilometers of the route, compared to just 11 and 28 kilometres of route of the second and the third respectively. As a result, Washington DC network serves 144 million people every year, nearly 3 times higher than that of the other two.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, third, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97660818713 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48751885962 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3201443765 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172540994571 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800594868006 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811415867876 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11713644071 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043069966465 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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