The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by akva on Sun, 06/16/2019 - 14:21

The table provides information about the six underground railway system in 6 different cities. The data are about the time when it opened, the total kilometres of its route and the overall passengers per year.

Overall, it is clear that London had the longest route while Kyoto had the shortest. Tokyo had the highest number of passengers per year, but Kyoto still had the least among the 6 cities.

To start with, London had the oldest railway station that opened in 1863, with the longest route at 394 kilometres and passengers of 775 million per year. In contrast, the railway of Paris that opened in 1900, is only half of the total kilometres of London, but the number of passengers almost doubled at 1191 million. Tokyo railway had a total of 154 kilometres, although the route is not longer compared to london and Paris, it is clearly noted that they had the highest number of passengers in a year at 1927 million.

After more than a decade, the Washington DC railway is build, with 126 total kilometres of its route and 144 million passengers in a year. Then 4 years later, another railway opened in Kyoto which had the shortest route at only 11 kilometres with the lowest number of passengers in a year at 45 million. The latest railway that opened in 2001 in Los Angeles and it is the second to the shortest route at 45 kilometres. Its total passengers in a year is only a quarter of the total passengers in Washington DC railway.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y that opened in 2001 in Los Angeles and it is the second to the shortest route a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, still, then, while, in contrast, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66147859922 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49988417422 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424124513619 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1957923856 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904939346787 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632001446105 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124199250126 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092343314416 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10925095488 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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