The table below gives information about the weekly consumption of ordinary milk and butter, and high and low fat alternatives of milk and butter among different age groups in one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table compares the weekly consumption of full-fat and low-fat milk along with full-fat and low-fat butter among 4 age groups in a European nation
Overall, while elders are the ones who used milk the most, butter was the most popular item for those who were between 45 to 65. Moreover, people under 25 preferred full-fat milk while only people from 26 to 45 showed a strong preference towards low-fat butter
With regards to the consumption of milk, people under 25 drank the least with 1200ml per week, which comprises 59% full- fat and 41% low- fat. The weekly consumption of people from 26 to 45 years old was higher, reaching 1650ml- 20% full-fat and 80% low-fat. Adults from 45 to 65 bought 1670ml of milk (55% low fat and 45% full fat) and senior individuals over 65 years old’s weekly milk consumption was the highest with 1900ml. Specifically, 30% and 70% of this was full fat and low fat respectively
In terms of butter, this product was bought the most by people in the age group of 45-65, reaching 60g with even portions of low-fat and full-fat. People in age group of under 25, however, consumed the least with merely 12g including 60% full-fat, which is 7g lower than that of whom from 26 to 45 with 38% and 62% of full-fat and low-fat respectively. Finally, elders above 65 consumed 30g of butter weekly with 49% full-fat and 51% low-fat
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...weekly with 49% full-fat and 51% low-fat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65145228216 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38327476859 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522821576763 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2692747695 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.142857143 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254368897681 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163893595907 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700624088867 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214897416527 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082614905851 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.81 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...weekly with 49% full-fat and 51% low-fat
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65145228216 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38327476859 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522821576763 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2692747695 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.142857143 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254368897681 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163893595907 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700624088867 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214897416527 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082614905851 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.81 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.