The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevantPercentage of national consumer expendi

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant
Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category -2002
Countries Food/Drinks/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education
Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21%
Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20%
Spain 18.80% 6.51% 1.98%
Sweden 15.77% 5.40% 3.22%
Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%

The table illustrates the proportion of purchaser payment for three groups of items in five different countries during 2002.
Overall, consumer in five different nations spent more money on food, drink, tobacco than clothing and education.
In fact, consumer in Sweden spent money on food/drinks/tobacco at least, with 15,77% while there was 32.14% of Turkish expenditure. Being comsumed in 2002, food/drinks/tobacco in Ireland is the second percentage of this group, at 28.91%. This figure for comsumer expenditure in Italy and Spain were only 16,36% and 18.8% respectively.
The percentage of consumer expenditure for clothing/footwear demand in Italy is the highest percent , at 9.00%, compared to 5.4% of consumer expenditure in Sweden. At the same time, Irish, Spainish and Turkish spending on cloting /footwear around 6.5% of expenditure. Among three different groups of category, spending money on leisure/education was lowest. In Spain and Ireland, consumer spent less money on leisure/education just around 2%, although that of expenditure nearly doubled in Turkey, with 4.35%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, at least, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73456790123 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42049711583 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9201346047 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174079615234 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777902920643 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659982679052 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132587770161 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640467380651 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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