The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012.
The table represents how many passengers used three distinctive airports, namely; Dusseldorf, Frankfurt and Berlin Tegel in German from 2007 to 2012. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, the number of visitors travelling all three airports had increased. In particular, Berlin Tegel increased the most with the number of visitors but for the last three years this figure had remained unchanged, whereas Frankfurt had the constant rising trends. In opposed to those two airports, Dusseldorf had the periodic fluctuations.
In terms of Berlin Tegel, which had 17.3 millions of travellers in 2007? By 2009, this number raised more than doubled to record at 39.9 million, then from 2010 and onward, the number of visitors remained unchanged at 43.3 million.
In contrast, the rest of airports experienced a steady incremental trend where Dusseldorf had 27.2 million visitors and 36.5 million for Frankfurt in 2007. By 2009, Dusseldorf recorded the peak of 48.2 million travellers before it decreased to 33.2 million travellers in 2011, while Frankfurt had constant rise with the number of travellers to reach at 44.4 million and 51.1 millions of travellers in 2009 and in 2011 respectively. By 2012, both airports received majority of travellers as 45.6 millions of visitors for Dusseldorf and 69.3 millions of visitors for Frankfurt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...seldorf had the periodic fluctuations. In terms of Berlin Tegel, which had 17.3 m...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
... In terms of Berlin Tegel, which had 17.3 millions of travellers in 2007? By 2009, this numbe...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 million'.
Suggestion: 1 million
...vellers to reach at 44.4 million and 51.1 millions of travellers in 2009 and in 2011 respecti...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...s received majority of travellers as 45.6 millions of visitors for Dusseldorf and 69.3 millio...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...lions of visitors for Dusseldorf and 69.3 millions of visitors for Frankfurt.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in particular']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255319148936 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.102127659574 0.116061578633 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0595744680851 0.0759168565197 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0212765957447 0.0366838410393 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00425531914894 0.0131127313244 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.174468085106 0.155750635184 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0170212765957 0.0379272487307 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.80104046104 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0210936926555 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0723404255319 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127659574468 0.00967000014798 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1337.0 1161.00487805 115% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.9 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36666666667 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409523809524 0.337110787985 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333333333333 0.247514529752 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.280952380952 0.171178102325 164% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161904761905 0.112407865282 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80104046104 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 50.7997411376 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4866653495 42.9750493124 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.7 135.714022679 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 54.3333333333 47.7609492067 114% => OK
Elegance: 3.5 2.94281807926 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292051434569 0.418131533498 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151026670155 0.181151798455 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111890016716 0.0850326197045 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654004887896 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151677849701 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150207023896 0.228904883108 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770888075432 0.108899403657 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33178224257 0.367819155151 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106282678114 0.0812612215331 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213582674315 0.316326947829 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407094730896 0.0921553760075 44% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.