The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

Essay topics:

The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

Two pie graphs compared the five different sources of energy, namely; oil, natural gas, coal, hydroelectric power and nuclear power, consumed in the USA in the 1980s and 1990s.
Overall, it is easily seen that oil had been the most popular energy sources that was consumed in the USA for both periods. The coal consumption and nuclear power usage was increased while natural gas decreased. It is interesting to note that oil, natural gas and coal were the main energy sources in the USA.
The dominant energy source in the US was the oil for both periods as it recorded at 42% of consumption in 1980 and 33% in 1990. The usage of oil decreased because of the usage in other energy sources such as coal and nuclear power increased accordingly. While coal raised its consumption from 22% to 27% within a decade, American people doubled its use of nuclear power from 5% in a decade. The consumption for natural gas dropped by 1% from 26% in 1980, whereas hydroelectric power was the least popular energy sources in the USA/.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287804878049 0.268076937826 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.112195121951 0.116061578633 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975609756098 0.0759168565197 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.019512195122 0.0366838410393 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0243902439024 0.0131127313244 186% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151219512195 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0487804878049 0.0379272487307 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50111086431 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00975609756098 0.0210936926555 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10243902439 0.0948980150116 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00975609756098 0.00967000014798 101% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1025.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69444444444 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322222222222 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.247514529752 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116666666667 0.171178102325 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0722222222222 0.112407865282 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50111086431 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.546246751206 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.7227878949 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8795285892 42.9750493124 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.125 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 47.5 47.7609492067 99% => OK
Elegance: 3.125 2.94281807926 106% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.619612267512 0.418131533498 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.184056938367 0.181151798455 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651197961549 0.0850326197045 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.681043041218 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16284156987 0.157042692854 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.363016740119 0.228904883108 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167106268194 0.108899403657 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.502578848487 0.367819155151 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0291537135385 0.0812612215331 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.518643911783 0.316326947829 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632723404838 0.0921553760075 69% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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