The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given table illustrates data about the accommodation expenses per week and the annual wages in three different areas of London. Overall, it can be seen that although Nothing Hill is the most expensive in terms of renting a property, therefore it should be the wealthiest among the given locations.
Looking at the details, the 1-bed housing is far the cheapest among the three areas, with 375 pounds spent weekly on it in Nothing Hill, 325 in Regent's Park and only 215 in Fulham. This amount doubles when it comes about a property with 3 beds in the first 2 areas. By contrast, people from Fulham have to pay 3 times the amount if they want to leave in a 3-bed property, as compared with the 1-bed one.
With regards to the salaries, the trend needs to be matched by the tendency in the level of rents for each area. The income for those living in 1-bed accommodation in Nothing Hill should be slightly higher than that of dwellers of Regent's Park, of around 98.500 and 85.500 pounds per year, respectively. This need to represent only half those who live in 3-bed places, with a salary of 194.000 and 170.500 pounds, respectively. However, in the least expensive area regarding the rents, this income is suggested it should triple for those who have the largest accommodation as compared to those with those who have only 1 bed in their shelter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...hree different areas of London. Overall, it can be seen that although Nothing Hil...
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...t of dwellers of Regents Park, of around 98.500 and 85.500 pounds per year, respe...
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...east expensive area regarding the rents, this income is suggested it should tripl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66945606695 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49917967669 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564853556485 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8044603245 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946249953398 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422338196145 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414516174439 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671153107501 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323409987417 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.