The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table describes the variations in the household types and families from 1984 to 2020.

It should be noted that household which one person and lone parent were nearly doubled in percentage from 1984 to 2020. In 1984 only 6 percent people were lived by themself, however in 2020, 12% households were occupied by lone people. In the similar way, four percent people were categorized as alone parent, but in 2020, the numbers were raised to 12%. In contrast to above mentioned trend, people who lived with dependent children were reduced from 52% to 36%, thereby, those households were demised by nearly 40%.

There was only slight variations for the couples lived with either no children or non dependent children. The couples who lived with no children steady increased by 4% from 1984 to 2004, and afterwards they increased by 1% in 2020. in the opposite side, the percentage of couples with non dependent children was only reduced by 1% from 1984 to 2020.

In conclusion, from 1984 to 2020, the household with non dependent children was reduced by 40%, one person and lone parent were increased by 50% and no children or non depended children were changed slightly. Despite all the changes couples with dependent children had maintained the position of being highest household in Canada from 1984 to 2020.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97747747748 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45809370389 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1647236471 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173660202066 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102898937957 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746807563552 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151780562489 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743861425369 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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