The table shows the number of cinema viewing, recorded in millions, for 4 genres of film in 4 different countries, namely India, Ireland, New Zealand and Japan.
It is obvious from the data that the most popular film is Action movies and India has the highest number of watching among these countries in all kinds of film.
The people in all countries prefer to watch action films more than the other types of film which has the most viewing number in all countries and also the best of total viewing number of all film genres at 29.9 millions. Horror movies are the worst genre of film in the amount of total cinema viewing, at 15.8 millions, but it is the second preference of films in Ireland and New Zealand with 6.4 and 4.7 millions respectively.
In each genres of film, India is the top of movie watching number with the exception of Horror films and there is a 24.5 millions in total cinema viewing, which is the greatest rate in all countries. The least of total watching number is Japan, at 17.8 millions, although the amount of watching in Romance and Comedy genres are not the last ranking and there is also the same number of cinema viewing in Romance film as New Zealand at 4.5 millions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...dia is the top of movie watching number with the exception of Horror films and there is a 24.5 millio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25567446163 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.4452787483 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262205708979 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159213151611 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680690607044 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187353367183 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780587843492 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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