The table below shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia in 2004 City Usage charge per kiloliter up to 125 kls Usage charge per kiloliter over 125 kls Average water bill per household Adelaide 0 42 1 312 Brisbane 0 84 0 84 310 Melbourne 0 78 0

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The table below shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia in 2004.

City

Usage charge per kiloliter (up to 125 kls)

Usage charge per kiloliter (over 125 kls)

Average water bill per household

Adelaide

$0.42

$1

$312

Brisbane

$0.84

$0.84

$310

Melbourne

$0.78

$0.78

$253

Perth

$0.42

$1.50

$332

Sydney

$0.98

$0.98

$319

As can be seen from the table that the cost of water varies remarkably from different cities in Australia in 2004.
When the usage of water is under 125 kiloliters, the cost in Adelaide and Perth is the lowest, which is 0.42 dollar. By contrast, the cost per kiloliter water under 125 kls is quite high in Sydney and Brisbane, rearching $0.98 and $0.84 respectively.
As for the Usage charge per kiloliter when the usage outnumberes 125 kls, the average cost per kls water is roughly $1.0, except for the cost of Perth is $1.50.
Just as what have been mentioned above, with the highest cost of usage charge per kiloliter, the average water bill per household of Perth is the most of the five cities, 1.5 times as much as the that of Melbourne.
The average water bill per household is expected to be around $310. Related polity may be carried out in order to low down the overuse of water. Rising the cost of water is of significance to raise citizens awareness of saving water.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, as for, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52542372881 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3747504073 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514124293785 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1905687063 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522289918184 0.215688989381 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210518990002 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108648035691 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271106895206 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977969235087 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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