The provided bar chart illustrates information about the statistics of people brought into custody in the Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, US, and Canada from 1930 to 1980. The units are measured in thousands.
Overall, it is clearly apparent that over the five decades, the counts of confinement in the US had always stood over hundred thousands except in 1970, when compared to other four countries. Meanwhile, Britain who had the lowest imprisonment number while Canada had the maximum count in 1930 were replaced by Australia to the least, and the outperformer was the US in 1980.
In 1930, the Great Britain had documented approximately 24,000 imprisonment from where it started to rise gradually, and reached just over 80,000 in 1980. Next, Australia and New Zealand who showed around 70,000 and 100,000 in beginning had small volatility (downside) in the middle, then ended with numbers of about 50,000 and 90,000, respectively.
The most eye catching data was noticed in the US and Canada. Both the countries custody count in region of 100,000 (US) and 120,000 (Canada) in 1930. Followed by a persistent rise the United States surged to around 130,000 and with the slightest fall Canada showed about 110,000 in 1940. This rivalry continued in between, but later in 1980, the US outperformed and reached to the peak of approximately 140,000 whereas Canada ended up at more or less to 90,000.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Meanwhile, Britain who had the lowest imprisonment number while Canada had the...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reached just over 80,000 in 1980. Next, Australia and New Zealand who showed aro...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... noticed in the US and Canada. Both the countries custody count in region of 100,000 US a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, whereas, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06926406926 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69484605056 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9850888878 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129080875601 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534466033448 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385487585665 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801079456701 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00953875843791 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Meanwhile, Britain who had the lowest imprisonment number while Canada had the...
^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reached just over 80,000 in 1980. Next, Australia and New Zealand who showed aro...
^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... noticed in the US and Canada. Both the countries custody count in region of 100,000 US a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, whereas, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06926406926 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69484605056 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9850888878 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129080875601 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534466033448 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385487585665 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801079456701 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00953875843791 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.