The given table illustrates the information about the numbers of incarceration in five various countries from 1930 to 1980
Overall, It can be seen that the stats of imprisoner in the United States and Canada are relatively higher than other countries. While, The imprisoner rate in Great Britain was least.
In 1930, Whopping one lakh twenty thousand people had a jail in Canada. However, The number of incarceration were similar in United States and New Zeland, Which is 1 lakh. In Australia more than 60,000 people went in lock-up. In comparison to New Zealand half of the community of Great Britain had a jail.After a decade these figures suddenly rose up to 1,30,000 in United States. Meanwhile, In Canada and NEW Zeland the incarceration rate decresed by 10,000 and 50,000 respectively. Nevertheless, Great Britain did not experience any change. Between 1950 and 1960 the rate of imprisoned rate were nearly 1 lakh in U.S and Canada. On the other hand, It remained below 70,000 in remaining three countries.
After a 5 decades in Great Britain, Australia and New Zeland, The number of incarceration were same which is approximately 70,000. While, This trend fallen by about 10,000 each in Canada and United States. In the year of 1980 the figures of prisoner plummeted to almost 1,40,000 in America. While, In NewZeland, Canada and Great Britain stayed on nearly 90,000. However, IN Australia this rate reduced to 50,000 in last year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05020920502 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77611830864 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9522858015 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128201571736 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415617320908 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598926234216 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110017659858 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917674050998 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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