the table gives information about the percentage of adolescence between males and females who listened to music during a month in different ways live music, mp3 players, internet and CDs at tokyo in japan and the pie chart illustrates the proportion of record company'international searched a market that people were interesting live or recorded music.
as you can see from the chart, in men are more popular than women in live music , mp3 players, internet, except to CDs.
people are enjoying record in the whole ways.
at the table, 60% males choose live music while others have 44%. MP3-Players in men increase rapidly 79% that are twice as popular as than in women. the proportion of internet rise roughly in male and female to 55%, 42 % respectively.
Nevertheless, there are less people selecting CDs, trust only 19% in male and 22% in female.
at the pie chart, in the both gender are pay more attention to live performance at 70% while recorded was trust only 26%.
by contrast, Few people don't care about music insignificantly 4%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re more popular than women in live music , mp3 players, internet, except to CDs. ...
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...are enjoying record in the whole ways. at the table, 60% males choose live music ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96590909091 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86347162792 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.7607061859 43.030603864 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.25 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30633919318 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119598655628 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110612577231 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145300527322 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100408410284 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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